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Angie Rhodes, MS, BCBA, LBS's avatar

Hi Nathanael! You’re a good writer! This story is very well put together. One bit of feedback - the quote “DHS described the shooting incident itself as an act of ‘domestic terrorism,’” seems to imply the shooting was the act of domestic terrorism. Some might agree with that sentiment, but based on the context of the story I’m guessing you do not. I remain steadfastly unconvinced that anyone is being paid to protest. The woman’s flippant statement “I’m getting paid right now,” could refer to just about any income generating arrangement, from a traditional employer to passive income ventures to being a sugar baby to some rich dude with a humiliation fetish who gets a kick out of watching her scream “Shame!”. (I will admit the latter is unlikely, but you see what I mean.) I’ll keep an eye on your Substack as the story develops. Take care!

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